zachariaz0001's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[rock-FLY]

so its a review you want.......................

ok! here's some constuctive critisizm, i hope it helps!!!:

1. The animation was fairly good-better than i could do! so well done
2. The sound got a bit annoying- it suited the theme, but try and find something that doesn't repeat ovr.
3. It was good, but random- u need a bit of a storyline-or sumthin 2 explain wats happening
4. OVERALL: good job. i enjoyed it but a movie either has 2 be short and funny-or have sum storyline or something 2 let ppl no watz going on!!!!!! remake it, make it longer and change the music and it'll be really good

[operation:takedown]

ummmmmmmmmmmmm

well first use flash. ok??? flash!!!!!!!!!!!! good efort tho. I'm guessing these r sum of ur 1st movies. lol dw i used to import pictures of hellicopters 2!!!!!!! try and have a bit better graphics tho. it was kinda choppy and really random. better luck with ur next flick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

goldie12345 responds:

Thanks for the advice, I don't know why but i can't use the trail version of the adobat CS3 and I don't have enough money to buy it